Thursday, March 27, 2008

madeleine

maybe i can't write?
maybe this vacant hope for this ability
is all i have to hold on to?
but when i write,
what if words are said but no meaning?
sentences put down but brought no life?
if i can't write, then i cannot do,
and if i cannot do,
then i am such a mediocre girl,
mediocre madeleine

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

huzzah, you posted this at 11.11pm - a poignant number right there for ya.

you write very well, jeremy. kudos for articulating such intricate emotion. it's great that you've put your thoughts out here - i'm sure many people can connect with the notion of holding back from telling deep feelings to a special someone.

also: huzzah for promoting blogs via facebook statuses.

kudos kudos kudos.

11:52 PM  

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